Cry

There's no question that this is an absolutely beautiful piece.
I love the change in colors you did from the original photo, it brings a warmth to the picture.

There are two things that throw me off though and take my focus away from the overall picture. First is the lips, which don't seem to blend with the rest of the drawing. I think it may be that as the lips go to the other side of the face they need to become much lighter, but instead they are still dark with shadows. The second is the right eye. It doesn't have as much depth to it as the left and seems somewhat unfinished. Based on the reference picture you should be able to see the dark outline of the cornea right next to the nose, and a slight bag under the eye like you see on the left one.

Overall though this drawing really caught my attention and is wonderfully done. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="349" title="Aww"/>